I had a sine wave described to me like looking at a rotating circle side one once, must have been physics a level or at uni. But if you traced it and stretched it out a sine wave would be what you get if you see what I mean?
I don't think this is one of my best but its one of my favourites lol! more…
Liked your poem. Hadn't thought before about how a sine wave describes a circle (to me at the moment representing those areas where I am stuck) and yet is that beautiful and mathematical form that rolls through space or time or both or life (those areas where I keep going and discover). more…
As a tedious pedant, I feel I should point out that sine waves do have points that are horizontal. Still, it's a much better poem than we usually get on here! more…
it's not easy, as shyness often can be misinterpreted as arrogance, as unfriendliness. How much effort will you put into someone who you feel is not interested in your company? more…
I came up with the first verse a few days ago while staring out the window into the dark on the train home! it took me a few days to remember to write it down :)) more…
However I still feel quite vengeful at times :)) But getting this far I know its only a matter of time, so a //huge// step in the right direction :) more…
The mood it sets reminds me of the song "Crushed" by Front 242. The chorus of which goes:
"This heavy heart
Heart that I carry
Still holds the weight of you
And when I fall
As I always do
I'm crushed by the absence of you"
Recent comments (30)
In response to: "Swimming in the Dark" 164 days old
by Akashamustbekept [Member]
Yes you're right, the light is always the way to go, there's never really a contest! xx more…
In response to: "Swimming in the Dark" 164 days old
by adamantixx [Member]
beautifully touching...stick with the light hun and it will lead you to the happiness you seek and crave x
*hugs* more…
In response to: "You" 346 days old
by Akashamustbekept [Member]
Thank you :) more…
In response to: "You" 356 days old
by la_spice [Member]
That's so ....... lovely :)..... yet sad :( more…
In response to: "Shapes.." 478 days old
by Akashamustbekept [Member]
I had a sine wave described to me like looking at a rotating circle side one once, must have been physics a level or at uni. But if you traced it and stretched it out a sine wave would be what you get if you see what I mean?
I don't think this is one of my best but its one of my favourites lol! more…
In response to: "Shapes.." 479 days old
by Collar [Member]
Liked your poem. Hadn't thought before about how a sine wave describes a circle (to me at the moment representing those areas where I am stuck) and yet is that beautiful and mathematical form that rolls through space or time or both or life (those areas where I keep going and discover). more…
In response to: "Shapes.." 484 days old
by Akashamustbekept [Member]
You mean at the peaks and troughs? They are quite small though and often represented as a single point on a graph!
But doesn't it make an even better analogy for life? Ups and downs with stable high and low points?
And thanks! more…
In response to: "Shapes.." 484 days old
by The_Walrus Pro
As a tedious pedant, I feel I should point out that sine waves do have points that are horizontal. Still, it's a much better poem than we usually get on here!
more…
In response to: "Up out of the dark" 578 days old
by Chyna_Doll [Member]
:) x more…
In response to: "Warning" 663 days old
by ranfuchs Pro
good poem nevertheless more…
In response to: "Warning" 663 days old
by Akashamustbekept [Member]
It was more determination than anger I think, although I guess I was a little angry too!! more…
In response to: "Warning" 664 days old
by ranfuchs Pro
this is a strong poem. Written out of anger? more…
In response to: "Masked...." 670 days old
by la_spice [Member]
Just discovered your blog - it's lovely! :yes: more…
In response to: "Looking but not seeing" 671 days old
by ranfuchs Pro
it's not easy, as shyness often can be misinterpreted as arrogance, as unfriendliness. How much effort will you put into someone who you feel is not interested in your company? more…
In response to: "Looking but not seeing" 671 days old
by Akashamustbekept [Member]
Yes there are :) I know a few lol!!
Its the ones who aren't willing to look passed the shyness that I wrote it about, as there are plenty of those too!! more…
In response to: "Beyond the Dark" 671 days old
by ranfuchs Pro
amazing how verses just appear. Isn't it ? :) more…
In response to: "Looking but not seeing" 671 days old
by ranfuchs Pro
but I am sure that even in real life there are people who are ready to see, and do care. more…
In response to: "Beyond the Dark" 671 days old
by Akashamustbekept [Member]
Thank you:)
I came up with the first verse a few days ago while staring out the window into the dark on the train home! it took me a few days to remember to write it down :)) more…
In response to: "Looking but not seeing" 671 days old
by Akashamustbekept [Member]
I show much more here than I do to the people I know in "real life". Shyness doesn't seem to be a barrier when I can write! more…
In response to: "Beyond the Dark" 671 days old
by ranfuchs Pro
this is a beautiful poem. more…
In response to: "Looking but not seeing" 671 days old
by ranfuchs Pro
lot of people here do care and do want to see. But do you want to show? more…
In response to: "Masked...." 672 days old
by desiflychick [Member]
Hey,
You have some nice poetry on here! :D
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In response to: "I don't miss you" 685 days old
by Akashamustbekept [Member]
Yes because they mean nothing to you!
However I still feel quite vengeful at times :)) But getting this far I know its only a matter of time, so a //huge// step in the right direction :) more…
In response to: "I don't miss you" 685 days old
by ranfuchs Pro
definitely we do all feel so more…
In response to: "I don't miss you" 685 days old
by rowtheboat [Member]
True indeed.
But I think the best part is when you get to the stage where you don't even want them to miss you any more. more…
In response to: "I don't miss you" 685 days old
by Akashamustbekept [Member]
lol well it fitted so well, and the truth is don't we all feel like that from time to time? :) more…
In response to: "I don't miss you" 685 days old
by rowtheboat [Member]
*chuckles at last line* more…
In response to: "Grey" 725 days old
by I_Am_Xenon Pro
The mood it sets reminds me of the song "Crushed" by Front 242. The chorus of which goes:
"This heavy heart
Heart that I carry
Still holds the weight of you
And when I fall
As I always do
I'm crushed by the absence of you"
more…
In response to: "Grey" 725 days old
by Akashamustbekept [Member]
Thank you:)
x more…
In response to: "Grey" 725 days old
by adamantixx [Member]
beautiful and touching
*hugs* more…